1. My group and I planned our shots by first looking at the script and realizing that certain shots need to be made based upon the mood and tone of the scene. When Jacob and I were talking in the film, the camear would go back and forth on over-the-shoulder shot. In the beginning of the film we needed a long shot to show the surroundings of where the film was going to be taken.
2. Most of the scenes in this film did not follow the rule of thirds because when we place a grid on the scene, there is no direct object placed into one of the squares. Next time, we could adjust the camera to make sure th at we do follow the rule of thirds.
3. The over the shoulder shots create a very one on one impression of the character because you can look at the detail of the characters face. this works by having on character facing the camera; it will only show the back of someone's head.
4. The dialogue ine the final edit was sort of realistic. You can tell that it was hard to act when everything is scripted and you had to follow the lines correctly. The challenges I had when I edited the film was trying to decide when to switch the over the shoulder shots from character to character because sometimes each character would take a longer break than one so it would be difficult to find a stopping point.
5. For the most part the dominant mood in the film is happy/excited. This explains the mood because I was telling Jacob that his Great Aunt left him some money and who wouldnt be happy if someone found out they were given money for no reason? We accomplished this by having the mood be happy throughout the film because there needed to be no mood change till the end.
6. When using the over the shoulder shots, the person who is facing away from the camera is takingup a good amount of the camer with their head. The reason for this is because the camera is basically on their shoulder behind them and the camera is trying to capture both objects at the same time. Using the over the should shots is good in some cases bacause it can identify the mood in the scene and also show how the characters are reacting to it.
REFLECTION 1) What value are you trying to represent? - In our video we're representing sharing as our value. 2) What do you think your group has done well? - I think that our group has put ideas together well and decided how to combine them to improve our video. 3) What do you still need to complete? - We need to add the eding of the video as well as the voice over. 4) What are you most in need of feedback about? (We want to know if..., We're wondering if this camera angle worked when...etc.) - We want to know if we got the point of sharing easily understood in our video. 5) Identify a challenge your group discovered and faced in creating the film. Focus on a challenge about how to best tell your story. Describe how you dealt with that challenge, including discussions you had, things you tried and decided to leave out, and what you ultimately did to address it. - One challenged we faced was that not everyone on our group was in the film. we dealt with this situation by continuing to film with a different set up. Morgan & Joselyn
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This post is from Morgan and Jacob. The positive comments that were most meaningful to us were from Chris and Brad and Michaela and Cole. (Two different posts, not a pair saying one thing). Chris and Brad told us that we should make the credits larger and more centered, and that was helpful because we did need to make the credits bigger and more centered. In addition Michaela and Cole told us that we could add more dialogue, and that helped us see that our video was good the way it was. The two best suggestions we got were from Kelsey and Kaycee (again, two suggestions from different posts, a pair saying one thing). Kelsey and Kaycee suggested that we find a way to fix the pizza disappearing in the sunlight. We agree with this suggestion, and our plan to address it is to add special effects. Michaela C and Ashley T suggested that we shorten the fade out at the end of the fighting clip. We agree with this suggestion, and our plan to address it is to shorten the fade out at the end of the fighting clip. POSITIVE COMMENTS: Brad and Chris: We especially like the close-up shot of the pizza, because it helped emphasize the idea that it was important. What we liked best was the use of the house as a background and the edits. The credits were good because they were rolling. Michaela C and Ashley T: We especially like the pan-over of the pizza and table at the beginning of the video because is helped emphasize the idea of the last piece of pizza. The first piece of music fit well because it was calm and light-hearted, a friendly scene. Michaela and Cole: We especially like the close up shot of john on the floor because helped emphasize that they had just fought. BEST SUGGESTIONS: CHRIS AND BRAD: You could have added more talking between the two You could also make the fight last longer. You could also add another character. Feedback Michaela c and Ashley T The conflict was between him eating the pizza he had won off his friend or giving it to his hungery sister. The shots that contributed to the rising action was the medium close- up of jake and john about to fight also the part were jake slaps john's hand away it was a close-up of the last piece of pizza The climax was when john gave the pizza over to Morgan During the resolution John and Jake express that they are still friends with the playful back and forth conversation. We especially like the pan-over of the pizza and table at the beginning of the video because is helped emphasize the idea of the last peice of pizza. we rated your editing a 8. We would just suggest shortening the fade-out clip after the fight. The first piece of music fit well because it was calm and light-hearted, a friendly scene. Then the vinyl scratching and the fighting music fit really well too. The most important audio was the vinyl scratching. It completely changed the tone of the scene in a dramatic way. No titles, but we noticed in the credits that the music you used wasn't credited. Overall, we thought your film was very good, and we can tell you worked really hard for this video. March 23, 2012 12:29 PM Anonymous said... story: The conflict was between who was going to eat the last piece of pizza. 1. Sitting and watching tv while eating the pizza. 2. Zoom in on the last piece of pizza. 3. When Jacob slaps john's hand. 4. The fight over the pizza. suggestions- 1. You could have added more talking between the two. 2. You could also make the fight last longer. The climax occured when Jacob offered the pizza to morgan. During the resolution Jacob gives the pizza to morgan. You could add to the resolution by showing some more facial expression, this would help us see how they feel about giving/recieving the pizza. CAMERA SHOTS: We especially like the close-up shot of the pizza, bacuase it helped emphasize the idea that it was important. We think you should replace the shot where you hold up the pizza so it doesent get lost in the sunlight. The new shot would be the same as before but change the lighting in it. EDITS: We rate the editing a 8. One edit we would change would be the edit when morgan walked into the room. We noticed that between the first and second shot you used a straight cut we would of used a fade to black in this instance. USE OF MUSIC AND SOUND EFFECTS: There was no music in this video. The most important use of the sound effects in this video was when you used the "fatality" words after the fight. TITLES AND CREDITS: The title reflected the content because it was about pizza and it said pizza in the title. I would make the title even bigger and centered. The credits were good because they were rolling. But the sound was not cited correctly. OVERALL- Overall, We thought your film was good. What we liked best was the use of the house as a background and the edits. Our strongest suggestion is that you cite your sources because you can get into trouble for that. REVIEWED BY CHRIS AND BRAD March 23, 2012 12:31 PM Anonymous said... STORY The conflict was between who was going to get the last piece of pizza Here are the shots, dialog and actons that contributed to the rising action: 1. when you see that their is only one piece left 2. when the two characters look each other dead in the eye. we really like the rising action. The climax occured when the characters fought with each other In the resolution, Jake gives Morgan the pizza. CAMERA SHOTS We especially like the close up shot of John on the floor because it showed that Jake won the pizza EDITS: on a scale of 1-10 we rate the editing an 10. The first use of music is at the beggining to show its just a casual day for them. TITLES AND CREDITS the title was good, it showed that a conflict was going to happen over pizza. the credits were also good, but they did not cite their music sources. OVERALL overall we thought your film was good. -Isaiah S and Cesar J March 23, 2012 12:36 PM Anonymous said... Feedback by Kelsey and Kaycee The conflict was between the guys and sharing their pizza with someone who hadn't eaten all day. The shots that contributed to the rising action was the pan of the messy table and the last piece of pizza. We also liked the close up of the hand slap. You dont really need to add anything. The climax occured when the hand was slapped, and when they fight over the pizza. The resolution is when the guy gives the girl the pizza. We especially liked the pan in the beginning of the table, and at the end of the guy on the floor. We also like the close up of both guys when they are confused about hearing the voice, and the high angle of them looking around the room. On a scale of 1-10, we rate the editing a 9.5. We thought when the screen went black between the argument and when jacob is holding the pizza was dramatic and effective. The music was worked well in the beginning when they were watching tv; it created a laid back feeling. The music when the guys start yelling at each other was most effective because it helped emphasise the tension. We really liked the "deep voice" toward the end of the black screen. The credits and the title were really good and everything was properly cited/put together. Overall we thought your film was amazing. We liked everything. Our stongest suggestion is somehow fixing the disappearing pizza when jacob is holding it at the end. March 23, 2012 12:37 PM Anonymous said... The conflict was between whether jacob should give the pizza to Morgan or eat it. Here are the shots, dialog and actions that contributed to the rising action: 1.There only being one piece left 2.Them fighting 3.Them laughing and being friends 4.Jacob standing on John. Here are some suggestions about adding to the rising action: 1.You could more dialog 2. You could also add another character. The climax occurred when Morgan asked for the pizza. During the resoulution Jacob gives the pizza to Morgan and gets off pf John. You could add top the resolution by adding a little more dialog. This would help give us the idea that he was happy with his decision. We especially like the close up shot of john on the floor beacause it helped emphasize that they had just fought. On a scale of 1-10, we rate your editing an 8.5. The first time music camein was when John and Jacob were about to fight. It was used to help emphasize the mood of action. It worked because it was actiony kind of song. The title of the film reflects the content. It did grab my attention. The credits were done properly. Nothing was cited. Overall, we thought that the film was funny. What we liked best was that how you got across your message with humor. March 23, 2012 12:39 PM Anonymous said... The conflict was between whether jacob should give the pizza to Morgan or eat it. Here are the shots, dialog and actions that contributed to the rising action: 1.There only being one piece left 2.Them fighting 3.Them laughing and being friends 4.Jacob standing on John. Here are some suggestions about adding to the rising action: 1.You could more dialog 2. You could also add another character. The climax occurred when Morgan asked for the pizza. During the resoulution Jacob gives the pizza to Morgan and gets off pf John. You could add top the resolution by adding a little more dialog. This would help give us the idea that he was happy with his decision. We especially like the close up shot of john on the floor beacause it helped emphasize that they had just fought. On a scale of 1-10, we rate your editing an 8.5. The first time music camein was when John and Jacob were about to fight. It was used to help emphasize the mood of action. It worked because it was actiony kind of song. The title of the film reflects the content. It did grab my attention. The credits were done properly. Nothing was cited. Overall, we thought that the film was funny. What we liked best was that how you got across your message with humor. Michaela and Cole March 23, 2012 12:40 PM
